
He stumbled upon the treasure quite by accident. He was exploring the vicinity when he happened upon it. His first thought was: This cannot be real. He approached gingerly. Someone might be playing a trick on him. Maybe he was being observed. But no one sprung from a concealed location, no one yelled for him to halt his advance; it seemed safe to move forward. When he arrived at the treasure, he bent down to touch it, just to make sure it was real. After one touch, he fled to better-known and safer environs.
That night he could not sleep for thinking of what he had discovered. He thought and thought of ways he could explain it to members of his tribe. If he suddenly showed up with the treasure, anything he said would be suspect. One does not find treasure of this sort every day. No, he would have to think this through.
The next day he went back to where he had found the treasure, but dared not get too close. Instead, he peered at it from a distance. It was still there and untouched. But for how long would it stay undiscovered? A fire burned within him to possess it. If not for the taboo placed on matters of this sort by the Law Giver, he would claim the treasure as his own. But no, the Law Giver would never allow it.
As he tried to sleep on the second night after his discovery, he thought perhaps the Law Giver would understand. Perhaps he should approach her, and tell her of his find. No, then if she forbade him from keeping the treasure, it would be lost forever. Conceivably, he could bring it to his village and hide it from the Law Giver. But . . . where could he hide it? The Law Giver was all-wise; she knew the secrets of his heart.
Then quite unexpectedly, he overheard the Law Giver speaking of the place he had found the treasure. This is what he heard: “When they moved out, they told me they left a few things behind, and if we wanted anything, we were welcome to it. I’ve been too busy to go over there, but I think I’ll take a look this afternoon. Maybe there will be something Joey might like.”
Something he might like. Something he might like! Was she toying with him? Did she indeed know of the treasure? Later that afternoon, his mother called Joey to the front of the house. He was not allowed far from home because he was only five years old, so he appeared right away. His mother said, “Look what I found next door where the Simms used to live.” And there it was—the treasure!
His mother handed little Joey the bright red, toy fire truck that has caused him to lose so much sleep. You see, Joey had been afraid his mother would think he had stolen it, even though it seemed to have been abandoned. And in his home, stealing was the one thing his mother, the Law Giver, would never tolerate.


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Reblogged this on TINA FRISCO and commented:
Andrew Joyce delights us with a little story about finding a treasure but not being able to tell anyone … 🙂
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Thanks for sharing Tina 😀 XXX
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Always a pleasure, Chris 🙂
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What a nice story with a real twist for an ending. Here I was imagining gold and jewels but it was a red fire truck – only through the eyes of a five year old!
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What a clever story. There was no way to predict an ending like this.
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Had no idea where this was going! the visuals going along were in a different time! Loved the twist at the end! Nicely done! 💛 Christine Elizabeth
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Great little story, with a cute twist and a moral that isn’t preachy.
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Reblogged this on The Life & Times of Zoe the Fabulous Feline and commented:
A suspenseful story by Andrew Joyce. Visit the Ape’s site for the wonderful resolution to this tale.
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Thanks Zoe 👍😘
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I like this story very much!!
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Sweet story. My in-laws saved this and a few others from the 1950’s for my husband…colorful, interesting, but with sharp edges…it was a different time, for sure. ☺
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Cute!
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