Serve Your Story and You Won’t Go Wrong – by Janice Hardy…

in Writers in the Storm:

A novel is about the story, not the technical skills you use to write it.

Fiction is an odd combination of skills. The craft of writing is technical, with rules and techniques that can achieve different results, yet the art of storytelling is visceral, relying on creativity and instinct to pluck the best pieces from our imagination.

While the story is often what grabs us first, it can quickly get overshadowed by the technical aspects.

  • Is the opening line hooking?
  • Should this be first or third person?
  • Are my characters interesting?
  • Am I showing or telling?
  • Is there too much backstory?

Add in the countless blogs, books, and classes that teach good writing, and it’s easy to see how the focus can shift from telling a wonderful story to writing a well-written book. This can lead to technically well-written novels, but not great stories.

Instead of crafting a story readers can’t put down, we’re counting how many adverbs are in each chapter.

Now, I’m not saying ignore the technical side of writing—that’s how you bring a wonderful story to life—but don’t lose sight of the joy and magic you felt when that story idea originally came to you.

Because the story is what keeps readers coming back, not the technical skill.

How many times have you stopped reading a book that was well written, but the story didn’t wow you? And how often have you only read one book from an author who was clearly skilled, but their books felt flat? Their stories didn’t make you want more.

A story that excites you enough to write it, is a story that can excite readers enough to read it.

And that’s what we all want, right? A story that grabs readers by the shirtfront and hauls them into our worlds so they can play with our characters for a while. We want them to lose themselves in our stories first, and marvel over how we handled our stage direction later.

Here are some things to remember during the drafting process:

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2 thoughts on “Serve Your Story and You Won’t Go Wrong – by Janice Hardy…

  1. You are a smart girl, Janice; I have read bits here and there, know you are clever and capable but how? Given your statement here do you account for Herman Hesse. JP Sarte, Voltaire, Rousseau and all the philosophers. The serious writers. Those that worry, those that are concerned. Those that care.
    I am sure that you do. So why?

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