One of the most common missed opportunities I see when I’m editing novels involves mysteries.
Do you want to know what it is? Am I being mysterious?
Often, when trying to be mysterious, authors just end up being vague. It’s really hard to invest in a mystery when we don’t have enough information to understand what’s happening entirely.
Instead, it’s often better to let the reader into the mystery in order to build anticipation. Orient the reader around whether a character will succeed or fail.
Here’s what I mean.