Your mind is on fire as you type out your latest story at super-fast speed when, all of a sudden, you come to a halt. You want to include a date or a time period, and you’re not sure of the best way to express it.
Here are some easy guidelines to help you get started.
Dates
There are two simple ways to write a date but in fiction you should try to write the words out in full:
Thursday 9 June 2016 – with no comma and no “th”
or
Ninth of June
Always write dialogue the way your character would say it:
“She’ll be here on April the tenth,” said Mary.
Years
Write a single year in numerals:
2014
For a range of years, you can write the numerals:
1998-99 or 2002-2006
But for fiction, you should try to write the phrase in full:
She died sometime between 1958 and 1960.
AD, BC
Those terms stand for Anno Domini (Latin for the year of Our Lord) and Before Christ.
A more recent development has been the less popular terms BCE (Before the Christian Era) and ACE (After the Christian era). That is sometimes referred to as the Common Era.
The rules for using these are the same:
Put AD before the year: AD 450, AD 89, ADE 670
Put BC after the year: 250 BC, 700 BC, 350 BCE
You can also write out a phrase in full:
Four hundred years before Christ.
Decades
Write decades in numerals but with no apostrophe:
1950s, 2000s
or
Write the word in full:
She attended school in the nineteen-sixties.
Century
For fiction you should spell the word out in full:
twentieth century
fourteenth century
If using the expression as an adjective, use a hyphen:
eighteenth-century fashions
Alternatively, you may prefer to write the numerals.
If it is a noun, write:
11th century
21st century
If it is an adjective, use a hyphen:
18th-century music
21st-century literature
Historical Periods
Use capital letters for well-known and well-recognised periods of history, pre-history and the sciences such as geology. Here are some examples:
The Middle Ages, the Renaissance, the Bronze Age, the Jurassic Period, the Elizabethan era and the Age of Discovery.
More general terms should be lower case. Here are some examples:
medieval, modern, art deco furniture and ancient history.
Remember that you are writing fiction, rather than a textbook or article, so try to express the terms with as much elegance as possible, in a way that makes it clear and easy for your readers to understand.
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Very helpful info! I’ve debated how to write dates several times. Now I know. Thanks, Toni.
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Thank you so much Lyn. I’ve done the same thing, and I’m pleased that you find it useful.
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Wonderful share!!
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Thank you so much – I’m pleased that you found it useful.
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Fantastic share on writing numbers and dates, thanks. 🙂
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Thank you so much, I’m glad you find it useful.
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Indeed, dates in our writing can be confusing at times. My editor once gave me a rundown of the rules, yet, I sometimes still get confused. 🙂
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It certainly is confusing with so many alternatives.
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Thank you so much for doing that, Wendy and Charles
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Excellent!
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Thank you
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You are welcome. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Smorgasbord – Variety is the spice of life and commented:
Toni Pike is visiting The Story Reading Ape today with a very useful post about how to write dates when incorporating into fiction..
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Many Thanks Sally – Hugs XX
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Thank you so much for doing that, Sally xx
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Pleasure Toni… very useful.. xx
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Reblogged this on Toni Pike and commented:
A Guest Post on Chris the Story Reading Ape’s Blog – about How to Write Dates in fiction
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Thanks for posting this article, Chris
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Very welcome Toni 😀
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