on Writers Helping Writers:
It’s easy to surmise that propelling readers from one scene to the next relies upon a dramatic closing hook, the evocative or provocative impression at the very end of the scene.
Seemed like everyone was finding someone to pair off with. So when was he going to find a girl of his own?
Or—
Edwina looked the poor sod straight in the eye. “She’s not coming back, Edgar. Ever.”
But although hooks may tantalize, another underlying force is what truly launches readers into the next scene. This dynamic arises from the final step of scene structure: a new outcome—change.
I’m always trying to rivet my readers
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