on Just Publishing Advice:
Every writer needs to know how to rewrite a sentence.
It’s always part of the editing process to add variety to your writing or make certain elements clearer or more powerful.
Rewriting a sentence is not the same as paraphrasing. That is when you are taking words from another source and turning them into your own words.
When you rewrite parts of your text, you are looking to improve your writing and make it more readable and understandable.
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