on Just Publishing Advice:
Writing tips for new fiction authors
If you are new to writing and in particular, creative writing, there are a few typical pitfalls you should avoid.
Two of the most common traps for new authors when they start fiction writing are to narrate too much and to overuse the passive voice.
These two mistakes make it impossible to adopt the golden rule of fiction writing, which is show, don’t tell.
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