
As a fantasy/science-fiction writer, I’ve stacked up a bit of experience with world-building that I’ve wanted to share, and The Story-Reading Ape’s blog is the perfect venue.
Now don’t run away if you don’t write speculative fiction. Clearly, world-building is a key part of bringing fantasy and science-fiction stories to life, but it plays a role in all fiction, and in some non-fiction as well.
Setting as Character
Most of us probably agree that the physical places within our stories need to feel authentic. But if we create them as mere backdrops to the action, we’re missing an opportunity to enrich our readers’ experiences. In great fiction, setting plays a role in the story. It’s changeable, a help, a hindrance, a metaphor, a mood, possibly even a character in the drama.
Fantasy author Brandon Sanderson is a proponent of the idea of setting-as-character and builds a “character profile” of the world he’s designing. From his character’s point of view, the world has “personality” including strengths, flaws, and quirks.
Regardless of your genre, the world in which your characters live shapes their experiences. Selecting an effective setting is as vital as choosing the right players and plot. The world might be a friend or foe to your protagonists and villains alike as they navigate a dynamic environment.
The setting of a book may rejuvenate or deplete, trigger buried flaws or instill hope. It may force the characters to learn new skills or gather greater knowledge, or it may confront old fears and force choices that break the heart and soul. It may assist your hero in evading a villain or trap him with no way out. The impact of a world may be physical, emotional, psychological, or spiritual.
In choosing a setting, consider how your plot may play out as you increase the challenges the world imposes. How does the conflict unfold in a sweltering city or on a damaged ship at sea, stranded in a mountain snowstorm or stuck living with controlling parents, in high society or in the trenches of war? What if time/fuel/medication/food/oxygen is running out?
If a scene is falling flat, intensify your setting to up the ante.
But that’s not the only way to bring a setting to life nor the most important.
Setting is Emotional
More important than the “facts” of the physical setting is the character’s emotional connection. A setting truly comes to life when it’s infused with meaning, when we as authors connect the character’s emotions to the details of the physical place and all they evoke.
What about the setting does the character love or loathe? Is the place new to the character’s experience or does it raise memories? Does it elicit excitement, longing, or fear? Combine the character’s feelings with the details as perceived through his or her senses and the setting becomes something that interacts, pulls or pushes on the character’s personality and goals.
If your story is about a couple working through issues, consider the difference if the characters are stuck for the holidays in a cherished family home versus a home that was filled with abuse. What are the key details that symbolize the relationships with the environment? Perhaps it’s a belt hanging on the back of the kitchen door, or a treasured grandmother’s silver tea service.
Sometimes feelings are evoked by the passage of time and how a place changed physically. Or perhaps the place hasn’t changed, but the person who views it is no longer who she or he once was. The contrast is what makes the relationship between character and setting dynamic. Again, link the changes in the physical details or the character’s perception to the emotions they generate.
Setting will also evoke different feelings in different characters. What one finds dull another will find peaceful. What fills one character with a sense of adventure will terrify another. The various reactions to setting create tension, not only with the setting itself but between characters. Take the time to explore each character’s relationship with the world they find themselves in and pit those feelings against each other.
Remember that setting is more than place – it’s the weather and seasons, the sounds and smells, textures and tastes, the values and attitudes, the politics, the people, memories of the past and hopes for the future. Characters will have feelings about all these elements of the world, whether your story takes place down the street or on another planet.
Happy World-building!
Diana

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Thank you, Chris, for hosting, Diana and her wonderful post on world building. I agree with everything she says. In one of my books, the large kitchen becomes the emotional crutch for the characters to sit and discuss things and to eat the yummy pies that the cook bakes.
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I wanna be in that kitchen, Adele – YUM 😀
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me too 🙂
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From Wisp, right? I remember the scene and you captured the safety and comfort of the kitchen beautifully. You also created a tender emotional environment in Wisp’s room. You understand the concept of using setting to stir emotion well, my friend. ❤
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Thank you so much, Diana. Your words are so appreciated. xxx
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Wait … so you’re a prolific book writer, consistent blogger who replies thoughtfully to all comments; you visit all the blogs of everyone and comment thoughtfully there; and you read all our books? Are you sure you don’t have a hired team of elves? 😉
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Oh, I wish I could read everyone’s books, Erik. My goal is to try to read one for each blogger that I’ve developed a friendship with, but that alone will take years. I need a team of elves!!! 😀 Wouldn’t that be great?
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Reblogged this on firefly465.
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Thanks for sharing Diana’s post, Adele 😀
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my pleasure, Chris 🙂
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Thanks so much for sharing, Adele. I got waylaid by troublesome muses, so apologize for the late reply. 😀 Have a lovely weekend and Happy Writing!
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I know the muses well, one in particular is battering my head with new ideas even now. xxx
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😳😜😄🤕❤️
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That’s awesome. Better to be battered with ideas than to be chasing them down 🙂
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Fabulous post Diana.. and great information for all of us… x
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Thanks, Sally. I so think it applies to any setting we create. No sense in skipping an opportunity to draw our readers in further. Thanks for the visit and have a lovely weekend. 🙂
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You too Diana… I am trying to create a world where I have a 48 hour day! hugs xxx
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You’ll have to post the results. It will go viral! ❤
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Brilliant post Diana. I think that muse has you working over time! LOL Sharing everywhere! 🙂 x
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Thanks for all the shares, Debby. I so appreciate it. Yay! And this applies to memoirs too, right? I’m so glad that you enjoyed the post 😀 Happy Writing.
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Absolutely! Except my muse is my memory. 🙂
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This sounds great advice Diana 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by to read, Judy. Glad you found it interesting. Happy Friday! ❤
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Happy Friday to you too, Diana 🙂
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Wonderful advice and guidance, Diana. A terrific post.
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Thanks for reading, Jennie. I’m sure you are quite familiar with some wonderful world-building. 🙂 Have a lovely week, my friend. ❤
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You’re welcome, Diana. Best to you! 😍
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Brilliant post, D. As I read it, my mind immediately jumped to Dune and the impact the planet had on both the characters and the readers. For my money it’s definitely a character in its own right.
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That’s a great example, Meeka. I’ve forgotten a lot about that book (it’s been 40 years since I read it), but the planet and the spice and the giant worms. Yup! The world-building was awesome. Happy Writing!
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Yes! That is what stays with you. Happy writing to you too. 🙂
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I agree with Diana: great example. 🙂
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One of the best sci-fi novels of all time. 🙂
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A director I worked with in my acting days spoke of it as “ghost rules.” Meaning that you set the scene that the “ghosts” had to live with – distinctly enough to guide the piece, with room for surprising interpretations by the characters (ie., “dynamic,” as you point out).
Another great piece, Diana. Thanks for sharing, Chris.
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mgh
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Oh. I like that, Madelyn – ghost rules! I think your acting class was better than mine. I remember the set as being something that hopefully wouldn’t fall down! 🙂 Thanks so much for dropping by, my friend.
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Always a pleasure, Diana. Loved this advice: “If a scene is falling flat, intensify your setting to up the ante.” Metaphorically, cue scary music!
xx,
mgh
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Ha ha ha. Yes!
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World-building even in your short quips, Diana. I can totally see that acting class!
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Madelyn had a great comment here and I wish I’d considered the emotional aspects of the stage scenery in my old acting days. 🙂
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I absolutely agree with you Diana, settings set the imagination rolling, even of readers and most of the times they get transported to the places mentioned, the paths taken and the favorite spots to which the characters return. I liked the classics of Lawrence and Hardy for their authentic settings and emotional connections. Even Bronte sisters, Jane Austen and Pilcher had an excellent control over settings. When their books finish, a yearning to return to those places hits hard…that is probably the secret of their success. I like the way you say…’setting is more than a place….’ So true!
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Oh, I agree, Balroop. What great examples. I love Hardy and Bronte and Austen and how they drew me into their worlds. Can you imagine Wuthering Heights taking place anywhere else but on the moors! And yes, we want to return to those places after reading The End. Great comment!
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Thanks Diana. The settings of Tess and Pride and Prejudice are still fresh in my mind!
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Completely out of genre, but your mention of “emotional connections” here, Balroop, remind me of the hysteria and depression that people felt after moviegoers visited the world of Avatar.
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Avatar – now that was world-building 🙂
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Many thanks for reblogging, Sue 👍😃❤️
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