Source: Write at Home
Write with nouns and verbs.
No disrespect intended toward the other six parts of speech, but nouns and verbs are the meat and bones of writing.
Everything else is garnish.
Get your nouns right.
Make them concrete and specific.
Use cardigan instead of sweater and linebacker instead of football player.
Don’t philosophize about suffering when you could introduce your reader to a Marine widow and her fatherless infant.
And make your verbs lively.
Don’t walk if you can meander or strut.
Don’t just hit if you can slap, thump or pummel.
Writers should value every word, but wise writers give special attention to nouns and verbs.

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Welcome Suzanne 😀
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Very good advice! Thanks Chris for sharing Brian’s post! ;-). ❤
Peace, love & books for all,
Sherrie
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Very good advice, and well put. Food is a concept and a reader would not be able to visualise anything. T-bone steak and chili bean is concrete and triggers images, memories, tastes, and smells.
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Exactly, Massimo 😃
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Excellent advice…
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Just made me think, when teaching grammar. Thank you for sharing!!
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Welcome Joanna – Great to hear from you ❤
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Thanks for sharing Deanie ❤
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