Dun Writin’—Now Whut? A series by Susan Uttendorfsky – Owner of Adirondack Editing – (29 Ellipses)

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Ellipses

Ahh, another point of grammar that’s frequently either overused or incorrectly used. And, in this case, it’s understandable! There are so many different ways to use ellipses.

First, we’ll start with the punctuation mark itself. Some authors use three dots in a row…which Microsoft Word will typically convert into an ellipsis character. An ellipsis character only takes up one character space, and can be deleted by backspacing one time. This ellipsis is scrunched together more than if there were simply three period/full stop marks.

Other authors like to use a space in between . . . like this. It’s spread out more and I think it looks nicer. The problem is when it comes at the end of a sentence that is automatically wrapped. I can’t demonstrate it here easily because this will be copied into WordPress . .

. but you’ll end up with something like this. Half of the ellipsis on one line, and the other half on the next line. Using an ellipsis character prevents this from happening.

Now, how to use ellipsis. The horror, the horror!

Sometimes an ellipsis indicates a pause, especially in dialogue…and then there are no spaces before or after the ellipsis character. This is true when a sentence continues, as I’ve demonstrated. If the pause precedes a new sentence, then you leave a space before the new sentence… Like this. And, of course, the new sentence starts with a capital letter.

An ellipsis can be used at the end of a dialogue sentence to indicate trailing off speech, or anywhere in a sentence to indicate interrupted speech:

  • Mary wasn’t sure what to say. “Well, I’d…”

  • I…well… I’m not sure.”

(Stuttering is usually accomplished with hyphens: I-I-I c-c-can’t do that t-t-today.)

In reference material, or in quotes, if you were leaving out information, then you’d leave a space on either side of the ellipsis mark.

  • Mr. Raid said, “When you’re writing about punctuation marks … you want it to be correct.”

What about other punctuation and an ellipsis? Nowadays, there is rarely any punctuation used with an ellipsis. In earlier times, you might find a comma after an ellipsis in a quote when material has been left out. The only exception to this rule is what is called the “four-dot method” of ellipses. That’s when an author chooses to end a sentence ending in an ellipsis with an additional period or full stop. So not only would you start the new sentence with a space and a capital letter…. You’d also use a fourth dot outside of the ellipsis character to indicate the end of a sentence. If you were using the style with spaces, it would look like this . . ..

You can do that if you’d like, but whichever method you choose, be consistent! I prefer the three-dot method, which makes all the ellipses the same no matter where they appear.

We’re Dun for today, so keep on Writin’!

Susan

Susan Uttendorfsky

Owner, Adirondack Editing

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17 thoughts on “Dun Writin’—Now Whut? A series by Susan Uttendorfsky – Owner of Adirondack Editing – (29 Ellipses)

  1. Clearly…I have been in the dark up to now, sort of a total ellipses of the sun. It is a much brighter day in my back yard. Thanks.

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  2. Glad to have read this article. I recently read one which said the exact opposite. Obediently I went and added extra spaces either side of my ellipsis (ellipses?) and full stops onto the ones used as end of sentence. It looked absolutely horrible, so I changed them all back. Now I’ve read this, I feel vindicated. Thank you. 😘

    Loretta Livingstone Author: Where Angels Tread Rhythms of Life Hopes, Dreams & Medals Jumping in the Puddles of Life Fire and Ice http://www.treasurechestbooks.co.uk/ http://amazon.com/author/lorettalivingstone

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  3. Susan, are you getting… er… a bit dotty in your old age? (Well, in *your* case it might be more in your *young* age, but we won’t get too technical here.)

    I fully agree with your preferences on ellipsis use! Instinctively it has always felt to me that the “pause” sort of ellipsis is more “connected” to what comes before it and also should have a space after it to signify the space before the word that comes after the pause.

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    MJM

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